I write to you to remind you that we are almost endding the cut so teacher Gladys needs your email to send you my grades she gave me her email and her cellphone: udistritalgladlopez@gmail.com 3002468252
Thank you teacher and in case that you need me I will check the blog daily to see your comments.
Dear student, Check the following mistakes in the cv; pl, alignment, c a lot. On the other hand there is not an introduction in the written paper, you have gm,sp and aux mistakes, There is only 1 paragraph. Good connectors. 25/5
Dear student, Begin with C letter, the introduction is so confusing, check letter size and style, check sentence structure S+V+C,coh, gm, sp,p. That´s a good conclusion but revise the gm
Dear student, Your cv was excellent, there is not an introduction to the topic so you can lose easily, clear topic, good use of connectors and sum up. Sincerely, Maura Díaz
Dear student, In the essay you need to check your grammar, wiite number from 0 to 9 in letters, observe gm, sp and T mistakes, the introduction is not totally clear you need to revise again,remember to organize your ideas better, also use the Coh and ag correctly. Sincerely, Maura Díaz
Dear student, Nice introduction, correct tense people tells, gm, sp, t and coh mistakes, take good time to do it,wite number 0 to 9 in letters, good sum up. Excellent cv correc Cap Sincerely, Maura Díaz
Dear student, This is a good article but you need to check the conn, gm, also in your cv use a/an before nouns and correct I like be organized. Good score 44 Sincerely, Maura
Dear student, It is an amazing article, do not forget to empasize on the introduction and focus again in the conclusion, by the way do not forget to correct your cv. Score 45
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Dear student, The introduction of your essay is very mixed are you going to talk about how people do not take care about their health, or it is a problem you do not know? or the advantages to do exercise and have healthy habits?? The second paragraph is focused on food. So, you need to check and correct. Score 35 Your cv is ok Sincerely, Maura Díaz
Dear student, The introduction is not very well focused or it is vague, some puctuation marks are missing however the content is excellent. Sincerely, Maura Díaz
Hello Teacher, here is my Homework again completely finished. :) https://docs.google.com/document/d/1N6eqIRgiX0ZvivEbftbCmN5xXsisAc9HU_pR-MBHnWc/edit?usp=sharing
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ResponderEliminarHi teacher,
EliminarI write to you to remind you that we are almost endding the cut so teacher Gladys needs your email to send you my grades she gave me her email and her cellphone:
udistritalgladlopez@gmail.com
3002468252
Thank you teacher and in case that you need me I will check the blog daily to see your comments.
Dear student,
EliminarI wrote her last week from my yahoo account but I haven´t received an answer.
help me please
https://onedrive.live.com/redir?resid=87E6213BB966467A!245&authkey=!ANCH4AOgI1SFS34&ithint=file%2c.docx
ResponderEliminarDonobang gonzalez
EliminarDear Donobang
EliminarYou have some grammar mistakes in the first line, sp and pl mistakes.
Take care,
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ResponderEliminarAcademic Curriculum Vitae
ResponderEliminarJonathan Alexander Meléndez Nova
Marzo 2014
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1rzB7NFUx-E7fquCQi4dRoMAyDb6lxs0OpNrYS6wJNXE/edit
Dear Alex,
EliminarYou have a big confusion with degree names.
Take care.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/17hleIOtcVS7ZSL0Lowf9hcOCMSCZGhm8d5n_ZSla0yg/edit?usp=sharing
ResponderEliminarcv
jefferson camilo duarte
Dear student,
EliminarCheck the following mistakes in the cv; pl, alignment, c a lot.
On the other hand there is not an introduction in the written paper, you have gm,sp and aux mistakes, There is only 1 paragraph. Good connectors. 25/5
https://onedrive.live.com/redir?resid=153E36AE270902C0%21117
ResponderEliminarIvonne Villamil
Dear student,
EliminarThere is not enough information and it is so spread on the paper.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1WR2x8llj5Ivk4HKveVdG-P4VY9yELasQQwkWkVBDps8/edit?usp=sharing
ResponderEliminarDear student,
EliminarThere is not an introduction, only one paragraph the but... one has gm, coh, sp and RO mistakes. Good conclusion.
donobang gonzalez
ResponderEliminaressay
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1zms2xiI5eTG-G6xBOQMQkc0alrhcXz-xijQ_jFjHccM/edit?usp=sharing
Dear student,
EliminarBegin with C letter, the introduction is so confusing, check letter size and style, check sentence structure S+V+C,coh, gm, sp,p. That´s a good conclusion but revise the gm
Mayerli Villamil Poveda
ResponderEliminarEssay and CV
http://1drv.ms/1fhNUuH
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1N6eqIRgiX0ZvivEbftbCmN5xXsisAc9HU_pR-MBHnWc/edit?usp=sharing
ResponderEliminarManuel Felipe Martinez Cardona.
https://onedrive.live.com/redir?resid=E6866EA877A420B3!139&authkey=!ANJ9QxoiV1kx0JY&ithint=folder%2c
ResponderEliminarEdison Javier Aguilar Mora
Dear student,
EliminarAre you kidding? or killing me?
Maura
Academic Curriculum Vitae and Essay
ResponderEliminarDanna Carranza
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1o6iGA-FzmDsOwB28yH8Vp7Yaf-Susb9rMk8ZtFXCDLc/edit?usp=sharing
Dear student,
EliminarThe cv is ok, but the beginning of the essay about to be? is not comprehensible, you use connectors, it was good.
Maura
https://onedrive.live.com/redir?resid=E6866EA877A420B3%21141 Edison Aguilar CV
ResponderEliminarDear student,
EliminarI could not open this file.
Maura
William López, 20121165066
ResponderEliminarCurriculum vitae and Essay
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1o5gu0ISqsRNV5I_POiPCkb1wkGF9moTnQsW3h2ioCdk/edit?usp=sharing
Dear student,
EliminarYour cv was excellent, there is not an introduction to the topic so you can lose easily, clear topic, good use of connectors and sum up.
Sincerely,
Maura Díaz
http://1drv.ms/1e6Bq5m
ResponderEliminarDaniel Soriano Cárdenas. CV
Dear student,
EliminarYou cv is ok but it does not have skills and abilities.
Sincerely,
Maura Díaz
Angie Patiño Essay and CV
ResponderEliminarhttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1UXCDYX3oTbe7M6eJcKsJRJuLePdWAYwH9SeqdKSfY9w/edit?usp=sharing
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B-eeFD0UQRJGTUNIRlZXaG10YWt0VTRhWTFxaWRsR0hhQThv/edit?usp=sharing
Dear student,
EliminarIn the essay you need to check your grammar, wiite number from 0 to 9 in letters, observe gm, sp and T mistakes, the introduction is not totally clear you need to revise again,remember to organize your ideas better, also use the Coh and ag correctly.
Sincerely,
Maura Díaz
Dear student,
EliminarCorrect your cv style,margins and spelling
Maura Díaz
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ResponderEliminarESSAY
ResponderEliminarhttps://drive.google.com/file/d/0B-b8xVD1jvR6YWdnQ0VJdnpVMVU/edit?usp=sharing
CV
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B-b8xVD1jvR6bFJDMFEwT0xGSDQ/edit?usp=sharing
Dear student,
EliminarNice introduction, correct tense people tells, gm, sp, t and coh mistakes, take good time to do it,wite number 0 to 9 in letters, good sum up.
Excellent cv correc Cap
Sincerely,
Maura Díaz
Luisa Aguilar. 20121165139
ResponderEliminarCV and Essay
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B_DlihNn5QLCSzZoRWZRdmZFdzQ/edit?usp=sharing
Dear student,
EliminarThis is a good article but you need to check the conn, gm, also in your cv use a/an before nouns and correct I like be organized.
Good score 44
Sincerely,
Maura
Essay by Jonathan Meléndez Nova
ResponderEliminarTop: Three Best Natural Photographers
https://docs.google.com/file/d/0B-vqhVRteAlVS3NSYnZfaUFaVWs/edit
Dear student,
EliminarIt is an amazing article, do not forget to empasize on the introduction and focus again in the conclusion, by the way do not forget to correct your cv.
Score 45
Sincerely,
Maura Díaz
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ResponderEliminarby yurany gelvis niño
ResponderEliminartop: high-powered in Colmbia
https://mail.google.com/mail/?ui=2&ik=43de4d22c1&view=att&th=1451e854597f9328&attid=0.1&disp=safe&zw
Dear Yurany
EliminarYour link defenitely do not open. I need this hw urgent.
Sincerely,
Maura Díaz
http://1drv.ms/SM0xG5
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ResponderEliminarDear student,
EliminarYour cv is excellent, in your essay there is not an introduction so, your ideas can be lost easily.
Your grade 42
Sincerely,
Maura Díaz
Essay and CV
ResponderEliminarMónica Lorena Guzmán
https://onedrive.live.com/redir?resid=BCCCD6198DB4BF65%212140
Dear student,
EliminarThe introduction of your essay is very mixed are you going to talk about how people do not take care about their health, or it is a problem you do not know? or the advantages to do exercise and have healthy habits?? The second paragraph is focused on food. So, you need to check and correct. Score 35
Your cv is ok
Sincerely,
Maura Díaz
CV. PAULA ANDREA ROA GOMEZ
ResponderEliminarCODE: 20122165007
https://onedrive.live.com/redir?resid=BCCCD6198DB4BF65%212142
Marcela Ramirez 20122165-520
ResponderEliminar-CV
-Living in the city
https://onedrive.live.com/redir?resid=D840B9301338481A%21136
Dear Marcela,
EliminarYour cv is excellent and your article has the needed cohesion, your grade is 46.
Sincerely,
Maura Díaz
https://onedrive.live.com/redir?resid=D319529C03B0D64D%21559
ResponderEliminarPIQUES
https://onedrive.live.com/redir?resid=D319529C03B0D64D%21560
By: Laura del Pilar Moreno Pérez
Dear student,
EliminarYour cv is ok and your article need a revision on spelling, vocabulary and grammar, overall is ok.
Grade 43
Sincerely,
Maura Díaz
ARTICLE Juan Felipe Herrera Cantor 20092165011
ResponderEliminarhttps://www.dropbox.com/s/8p92u446ryv75qe/The%20Modern%20Terrorism.docx
Dear student,
EliminarThe introduction is not very well focused or it is vague, some puctuation marks are missing however the content is excellent.
Sincerely,
Maura Díaz
Edison Aguilar
ResponderEliminarCV:
https://onedrive.live.com/redir?resid=E6866EA877A420B3%21141
Dear student,
ResponderEliminarYour final grade is 43
Sincerely,
Maura Díaz
how can i upload something please xd
ResponderEliminarhttps://onedrive.live.com/view.aspx?cid=99D52BCADD36A055&resid=99D52BCADD36A055%21299&app=Word
EliminarKevin David Cruz Betancourth
I just remind you that the link did not open
Eliminarhttps://onedrive.live.com/view.aspx?cid=348858CF7478DC2A&resid=348858CF7478DC2A%21137&app=Word
ResponderEliminarhttps://onedrive.live.com/view.aspx?cid=348858CF7478DC2A&resid=348858CF7478DC2A%21139&app=Word
ResponderEliminarHi teacher, again I´m going to post the essay.
ResponderEliminarhttp://1drv.ms/1l1H9xd
Hello Teacher, here is my Homework again completely finished. :)
ResponderEliminarhttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1N6eqIRgiX0ZvivEbftbCmN5xXsisAc9HU_pR-MBHnWc/edit?usp=sharing
https://onedrive.live.com/view.aspx?cid=AE5FBDEE8670A67E&resid=AE5FBDEE8670A67E!135&app=Word
ResponderEliminarCV
PIEDAD YURANY GELVIS NIÑO
Yurany link:http://1drv.ms/TnWq3J
ResponderEliminarJenny´s link
ResponderEliminarhttp://1drv.ms/1q2nLDd
https://onedrive.live.com/view.aspx?resid=BCCCD6198DB4BF65!2142&app=Word
ResponderEliminarDear Paula,
EliminarDid you have the article joined to this activity?
https://onedrive.live.com/view.aspx?cid=3F54951A11C273C6&resid=3F54951A11C273C6%21121&app=Word
ResponderEliminarDear Michael,
ResponderEliminarThis link did not open